COOL!!

ITS TRUE MAN THAT I FEEL LIKE IT!!!

Gah.... XD

You submitted your new song right as I was reviewing your original one. Well, I guess I have to review this one now, huh? XD

It seems you've changed your percussion in the beginning. You've added another harmony, too - it's nothing short of perfect as far as what I'd ask for.

You have that same, awesome melody there. Sweetness. I love it. =D Ooh, and you've added to it! I think I liked it without that extra bit, but it's still really, really good.

Sheer awesomeness, I tell you. You've done a great job with this song. (The one flaw, I think, is the part where you take out all but the drums, add the harmonies one by one, and then add the melody. But it's still a great song.)

I have nothing to suggest, save try remaking it when you're a lot better at this - if it's this good now, imagine it then! =D

I want to remix it even more now. XD