Strike Strikes Pt.2

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Strike Strikes Pt.2

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This is Pt.2 of strike strikes, I've added more to the arrangement to keep it interesting, and sound FX to give it more depth.

I don't think I'm completely done with it, I haven't made an attempt to fully mix it.

Where I'm at now with it is that I can decide to mix it and finish it, or keep experimenting with different sound FX.

I'm a little torn between what to do, because part of me wants to complete it. But part of me knows that there may more I can accomplish, from experimenting.

Uhhhhhhgggg.........I need advice from anyone that hears this.
Thanks :D

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ADR3-N

2016-12-18 03:07:47

This isn't bad. Could use an overarching melody and a dedicated bass rather than just the single line arp. We get some atmospheric synths later but this doesn't do much for the track. Also, the super high pitched arp at the end is almost ear breaking for me. Overall, it was listenable, but not my preference.

HEYitsTHAToneGUY25 responds:

Thanks I appreciate your critique, and yea melody seems like a good idea, i just didnt want to crowd the mix with too much going on, but i get your point.

And yea sorry about that ending, I tried to give it some kind of ending flare but i guess it didn't work out, but anyway your response is duly noted for a reference of some things i should and shouldn't do.

And Thanks for the Scout, Right on man!