Content does not equal quality. That's a rule of thumb for game designers, and one that I think applies to all art forms, including your song, which at times feels like several instruments playing their own solos rather than as a conglomerate. I felt that the guitar was more Seinfeld than suspense, the synthesizer more horror than anything, and everything else just came across as noise.
The only advice I can give you is to keep trying, don't feel discouraged because if you feel anything right now, you should feel challenged, challenged to improve your skill and eventually perform at the best of your abilities. I'm here to review submissions, not the submitter, good luck on future projects.
TigerM 
