I really like you're structure through the fours. thats kind of how I write. You lead in with a 2, run 4, then back out with a 2. And it's so hard to ever figure out what should be where... 2 8's? a chorus and a half verse. Or the chorus' on each end of the songs spectrum depending on how you structure the verses context... especially on a loop. It's sick starting the next line rhyming with the end of the last, but way hard to figure where you fit it in when you blast. you can really ramble with those sentences because they basically punctuate to Example (the core - theme; the obtacle, and the overcome) It's almost like you gotta sing it coming in, but you rap it cuz thats what you know. Everything is relevant as long as you know it is, poetry in motion to define how you're feeling. I wrote rap and posted em for 2 years here, now i'm trying to figure out how to structure a sing song. It's all pretty fun and fulfilling. Keep it up bro, the next ones right down the street!

lovin the laidback mood of your delivery and rhyme structure.

one thing you could work on is your mixing, it could be tweaked a bit more to clarify a few ear friendly frequencies.

the words are manifested, dope piece dude.

Q ~~