5 minutes, I found myself starting to get tired

Loops rather nicely.

I did like the beats you had going, but a break from them here or there may have been nice.

The low bass-guitarry melody was kinda cool.

The melody starting at 0:30 gets me grooving and I liked the soft cymbal crash you ended that bit with.

I do like the instruments you have going on.

It really feels more like a beginning than a finished piece to me though, my main issue being one of diversity.

If it's gonna be for a background tune, keep the number of instruments going on, the general pitch and the volume fairly constant, maybe. But there's so much you can change within that, that you just didn't.

Maybe change up the beats a bit? Maybe go without for a bit of the middle? Maybe throw in some more lead-guitarry sounds?

It's not bad to listen to, but after 5 minutes, I found myself starting to get tired; a feeling that the tune had no more layers for me to hear; nothing else to glean from it. It got a bit boring.

A fucking funky track

Pretty sweet bass and synth, give it more variety and a funky guitar riff and this thing could be perfect. Nice work