Impressive

what a strange remix of the original song?! At first I didn't make the connection then I heard "let me explaaain myyseeelf XO!" and then I was like, YES I KNOWZ THAT FRUM SUMWHERE! then I proceeded to look like three songs down and there it was, the original in all it's glory.

The transitions in this one are handled much better, I didn't feel there was any abrupt crashes or segments, it went all good.

I didn't find it random either, I could understand why it would be perceived as that, but really I personally thought the arpeggiated notes did much for the pieces chaotic, somewhat unpredictable core!

I could actually understand the grunting now! It says scary things :(

I don't know if this is Industrial, I felt it was more techno, but hey what do I know. I felt the ending was a tad abrupt, it didn't loop that well, but hey who cares about that at this point.

I think you did a great job working off this song. Kudo's points to you PinkWalrus!

Wasnt bad.

This wasnt bad, only a couple complaints. It seemed kinda random in some points, but if thats your thing thats your thing! Something else is that there was a noise, kinda like a hit maybe something, i dont think it was a synth. But had a lot of hipass noise that kinda hurt my ears. You did a nice job on the vox though, keep it up!