this is why i love the audio portal

beautiful, you definitely achieved really emotional music. I think you should have dropped the strings at the end, made the song just drop instruments slowly then have the bass fade into silence. really REALLY good though

Quite impressive

Very dark, very interesting how the melody works out. There's a lot of repetition in the pieces foundation, but you sprinkle plenty of counter melodies on it to give it a fresh and entertaining core to listen to.

You are using some very good samples, if I may ask, what VST's and program do you use?

Back to the song.

The constant timpini is what I feel gave it the marching feel, in the pitch black of night, surrounded by darkness, hearing only the rustling of your fellow soldiers as they march on.

I get several darker overtones in this, and again the repetition assists this cause.

I felt the violin shouldn't have cut out like it did, it helps the piece a lot and I felt it could have held a more prominent role in the piece.

The ending as Rucklo brought up was too abrupt. The ending where you brought out those cello chords, I mean literally like 5 seconds before the ends was really saddening to me. I felt the song could have really done something special at that point, could have really jumped up and screamed it's fury in a sense.

Still, great work, a very well made piece. I hope you stick around to show us more, if you do please send me a message, keep me up to date.

5/5 from me JSaiz, welcome to the portal. I'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime! Keep up the good fight!

Really dark...

...song, it gave me a feeling of "pressing on", kindof the knight in shiny armour is on his way of being defeated, maybe he lost a limb or two... yet he presses on, even tho all hope is lost.

It´s a well composed song indeed, but there are some flaws to it. The high pitched string that comes in later on would feel better with some (more) reverb. As of now when it stops playing, it stops very sudden.

I didn´t quite enjoy the drums either, they didn´t quite fit. Actualyl , the whole percussion part felt like it kindof didn´t belong. Try smoothen things out with some send reverb, maybe filter a few things alike etc. Simply (not so simple tho:) try to simulate a place where your orchestra is playing.

And don´t make it end so sudden :)

Great job though, I really enjoyed the song.