I would say that the same sounds aren't good enough (or at least their placement in the mix)
I suggest trying different patterns. Maybe that will make them "fit".
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Author Comments
2024 EDIT: Setting this song to public again for archival purposes.
So this piece is sounding REALLY BAD, and I don't know how to fix it so for now, I really need Criticism!
Vocals by RebekahAmberClark.
No thumbnail because this song isn't complete.
EDIT: as you can see, I voted 2.
I think its the sounds themselves that are kind of broken, try just experimenting more maybe.
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 390
- Downloads
- 16
- Score
- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Mar 16, 2017
- 11:56 PM EDT
- Genre
- Dubstep
- File Info
- Song
- 3 MB
- 2 min 40 sec
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