its alright

you got some good sounds in here but then you got some bad ones too. i would take some stuff out of this track. just keep the synth that you use in the intro and take all the other synths out(maybe leave like one other). the percussion could be a little more the some through out. I'd say the biggest problem with this track is that there is too much change that isnt good. stick to the intro and sounds and branch off that progression.

ZOMG

I loved it,, one of the best ive ever heard

It was kool

I thought it was ok
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