Very nice! I'm amazed by your work at your age. Keep up the good work!

wow! (btw when i said my review was late on time and space i misread 2016 as 2017 XD) well anyways this is a pretty good song! i like the piano in the begining, and then the transfer to the synthesizer, its one of the only good transition of piano to synth i've really seen, most people make it sound kinda weird, lol. hope to see more awesome music!

Please keep learning, writing and making music. I know I always refer back to your age, but you're doing damn amazing stuff for someone who's only 14.

Ignoring your age, this is pretty good. The chorus drop is a bit of an extreme change in level, so maybe bring up the level of the verse slightly (I had a very similar problem with a recent track and it's really hard to get that drastic dynamic difference right without a buttload of compression, which I don't always like). The mix is pretty decent, but there's a little bit of muddiness and lack of separation between the elements in the chorus. I think it'd also be good to add a new melody in the chorus, and vary the verses with little bits of interest here and there to prevent it from becoming monotonous.

Either way, I'm still really impressed by what you're doing. Just make sure you keep learning and getting better!!! Can't wait to see what kind of stuff you're making in five years.