Hello. :)
You don't seem to get too many reviews and this introduction to your song sounds a lot like the stuff I make. :P I'll give you one.
I LOVE the atmosphere in this song. It sounds just like my song, After the Nova, though not as spacey. Gives me the image of drifting peacefully down through the ocean, the environment slowly changing... aah, so relaxing for how late I'm up right now. XD
It does begin to drag on after a while... your effects, especially that formant-ish thing that plays now and then, are amazing but you don't quite use them well. Listening to this, I'm sure you could have come up with others to diversify the song, make it more enjoyable while keeping the great ambient feel. Actually - what VSTs/samples/whatever did you use for this song?
Your note progression in the main pad is a pair. Hah! XD You might want to diversify it more than that as the song moves on... sure, I understand you want to keep that feeling but there's a lot of potential here and you really should diversify it a bit more. You do - and it's great when you do, but I'd like to hear that more often. You know what I mean? ;)
Great song overall. Why don't you stop by my audio page sometime and review a song of mine? Judging by this song, a review for my song After the Nova (either version will do) would be interesting, as they're very similar in certain ways, but you can choose. ;) Much appreciated... and keep up the good work. It's been more than a month since you last submitted and it would be nice to hear a new one soon. :)