The synths at the beginning are a little generic, but I like the climax into :11. I think the vocals sound a little nasal and pinched. Perhaps some chorus effects would help give them a broader sound. I really like the drums here, though, as well as the lyrics themselves. Super catchy and refreshing sound, especially with that nice, crisp cymbal at :53 (and other places). I like the atmosphere a lot, too. Unfortunately, this isn’t really a structurally complete piece, even if it has a smooth flow for the first minute. You should keep working on this - flesh out the structure, maybe replace a couple of the more cliche instruments, and this could be a really groovin’ track. Keep at it, man! ;)

7/10