Well...

It's good for a test, but as a song it wasn't very good. It needs a bit more structure and more thought into it. A bit random, so work on your songs. But, again, I understand this is your first, so I'll cut you some slack, I'm a fair guy. :\

???

to all of you who are thinking *this aint too hard*, audacity is complicated like chocolate in a canadian milk bag. still dont understand how you did this.

Straight Breaking

Nice drum variations. peace