Second latest!

You start it nicely... there's atmosphere here. Something like two drum sets too, apparently.

You don't have much of a melody in this song... well, you might have one, but your drums dominate the volumes and I can't hear the synths as well as I should be able to. So... since I can't hear it as well as I should, some of my criticism might be off. But... from what I do hear, it's good stuff and the only problem is the synth, which should have been tweaked a little in my opinion to fit the rest of the song a bit better.

Your harmonies, few as they are, complement your melody nicely. No complaints here... at times you get some nice harmony in this song. If only those drums were quieter...

But all volume problems aside, your drums are really good. Creative rhythms and samples, it's all here. The only problems I have are that the snare drum sounds especially loud, and the volumes. So... good job there.

Nice atmosphere here, it almost feels oriental. The things that detract from it are, for the umpteenth time, your drum volumes and some of your synths... now, I'm not asking you to apparently make a FOURTH version... but it could definitely use work.

I hope all of my advice helps you... keep up the good work. :)

stop

stop reuining my songs plz

mkay

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