For the love of God please record in mono in the future. It's painful to listen to. Firstly, you're rushing as all hell. That may be because you're nervous or something. I don't know. You're not letting any emotion get through as a result and you're giving a performance on par with that of Lisa from "The Room." Try to make the character at least sound human instead of some A.I. It's monotone and flat as all hell and the levels are excessively low. However, keep it up! I'm always happy to see new voice actors!