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Comatose

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Made this track at Midnight and wanted to experiment a bit.
Been practising with serum and trying to learn how everything works!
Used some stuff from Black Octopus (Ambient Guitar Samples and Veela Vocals) as well as some FX from Leviathan 2.
Hope you enjoy this!


Youtube Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ycy6aCCKvfY
Soundcloud Link: https://soundcloud.com/user-821839016-68347249/comatose-1

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It's not bad at all. I actually like ambient music, however I felt that this progression began to feel a little drab about a minute in and I'd have liked a new section to be thrown in to give me a little adventure to go on, you know? I felt like I was stuck in the same place here, which isn't a bad thing, but I like to go on journeys in music and I just felt that this journey wasn't too eventful. To give you some criticism that has actual application, I personally would've liked a "counter section", where it picks up in intensity and alters the chords you're using to give it more stress. I would suggest chords like dominant 7s, half-diminished 7s or fully diminished 7s. I mean, play around some and find what you like, as with all music, this is purely preference. I'm simply trying to provide you some decent feedback <3

FiveHeadz responds:

Thanks so much for the response! Ill have a go at trying some of the stuff you suggested later! Really detailed review which (I'm gonna be honest) I wasn't expecting! Cheers for the feedback! <3

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Uploaded
Feb 17, 2018
11:14 AM EST
Genre
Ambient
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3.7 MB
2 min 42 sec

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