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Well I think you need to review more songs. Don't expect ppl to review your songs if you don't review. So umm exploding desire gives me the impression of constipation. Not the best name I'd say for your song. Starts good. I like that bouncy soft sound in the background. The introduction of the drums is not the best. Once the kick came in than the drums fit better. I think what you did with this song is just play one pattern and add something. Play for a while. Add one more thing. PLay for a while....etc. This makes the song drag on for too long. If you changed up the rhythm than sure it would be better. Also the composition should change...notes wise. That bouncy sound is like playing the same stuff for almost the entire song. The explosion sounds also don't fit well. Only 2 explosions and later a splatter of explosions at the end? Not that much explosion. So umm yeah. Now time for you to review more. Only 8 reviews? You can start adding more by reviewing my song "system override" :) Okay so 5/5 and 9/10 review. Bye for now