I would appreciate some feedback on what you think about the song itself. I am too lazy to clean this piece up, and I know the timings are off in some areas, and I know the mixing/mastering could be improved a lot. This is more just a test run of what you guys think of my songwriting ability. Got a few of these, I can record more if you like, and of course my skill will improve. Thanks in advance.

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