you should finsh

didnt much care for start but once it got going it was really good, your vocals remind me of MR. BIG. if you ever want to colaberat on a song hit me up, check out my stuff!

Good.. very good

Finish this song its sounding good. Just a few things... first is, clear up the strumming a bit, make it smoother so that you can hear the pick on it less. add some background to it as well, perpaps a drum or some such. a few instruments would be even better.
Oh yes and make the ryhthm more smooth, its a bit jerky right now.
but overall apart from these things the song isnt bad.

Good start.

What you have right now sounds good. The beginning seems a little cliche' at first, but the change is really good. One more change in the whole song would make it a great acoustic ballad. Good work.