Cool
So here was an older piece on the portal but still an interesting sound, the quality is good and its not a loop so those are all positives, I do think you could ad onto this with more mixes and variaty to it and in the end it would improve but overall this was a fantastic piece you have here.
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I do think you could ad onto this with more mixes and variaty to it and in the end it would improve
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