Not Hip-Hop but w.e

Like Para-Noid said it's not realy Hip-Hop, more of a dance song, it's not bad tho for a first. I've noticed that transition from one genre to the other is hard so i think you should stick with w.e you like the most man. Anyway this ain't bad for a first attempt, 5d it,
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This reminds me...

I got a song I made that's hip hop but I never posted it up on NG. You should hear sometime.

Btw, your Hip Hop song needs more beats. More Hi-hats.

hmm...

Yeah, I could picture someone rapping over this... I'd go with ped and say you should add more to it, but in this case the beat might end up getting things a little cluttered. maybe just a high synth? or even a siren? and then, you know, get a friend to spit some sick lyrics over it... then you're golden.

Yeah about Hip-Hop

Ok, this may sounds rude but stick to flashes. Flashes only man. I see you probably may have startewd but if you can't figure out what Hip-Hop is then don't do hip-hop no more. This is a Dance song for sure. But I see where your coming from to let it be Hip-Hop.

The whole song is off-beat too. The snyth and the Drums. Aaaaaaaaall off-beat. But like I said earlier, keep on trying, not everybody is good when they first start fruity loops or reason.

Para-Noid

wuuuurd

yeh, sounds pretty empty, you should work on developing it further, bring in some more sounds and that and work on the beat, the kick sounds a little off.
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