Awesome!

This really is your best song, i totally enjoyed it. I think you really worked hard on this, and it also sounds great!

Nice work keep it up!

Go check out my latest song "Sunder" if you have time.

Hi rev.

Eh this tune sounds familiar. It's familiar because I played a tune similar (of course not exactly the same) to this for fun at home. Never did make it a actual song on NG but brings back memories. Your going crazy over the fuzziness. The bass is good. Video game music more than techno in my opinion. It could fit in one of those rpg take turn battle scenes. I think you could have changed up the drums. Maybe less fuzz on the bass. The high pitch sound is what gave me the video game impression. Sounds so 16 bit....or 8 bit. I can't tell difference between 16 bit stuff and 8 bit sounds. In conclusion you get a 5 by me and a 9/10. Quite good for only a 2nd song on NG. Bye for now

Has a complete skeleton, but lacks fill

The bass has a good melody with interesting changes and good reverb. Just two things, it begins disorting up a lot after a while, which is not good, and you can hear the clicks in it after a while.

Lead synth has an interesting pitch-up first note, then continues in a generic trance melody, which sounds way cheesy and not enough thought out, but it has a much better style and melody in the second part, which unluckily is when all the disortion comes in.

Then there's the drums, sounds good, catchy beat though it's just the same on and on. A little break or solo woulda done well some times.

It is a good base song, but it lacks filling and elements. There's so much more I could see in this song. Get your mastering fixed and have some more experimenting with it, then this can turn into a guess what

Good job dude

A very nice piece of work, I liked it a lot, the tune was quite catchy, especially when it got deeper into the song. Also the drum beat was fitting for it, as well as the tune towards the middle.

Wat program did u use btw, im curious

Gd luck with future submissions

PS - Thanks for the review :D

pretty cool.

the bass is sorta cheap. i know you spent alot of time mastering it, but it sounds really low quality and buzzy. the string is really buzzy too. i dunno how you do that, but its annoying, expecially with headphones. i like how you switched up the bass around middle of the song. and i love that melody with the string. you did a nice job on that. both parts, the first one and the part with the back up string ,are great.
one other small problem i had with it was when the bass faded out at the one part, it went really fast. i like the beat too, its cool, which snare did you use? you probably should have used a diffrent beat after a while, it got kind of repetitive. you did 'spice up' the hats though, that was pretty cool. oh yea and one more thing, the song had a lot of variety in it, note-wise, but you should have used some more instruments. this only had 3 melodic instruemnts.
5/5 and download, good job. just remember...more instruments and better quality!

-Exodus