its cool, but...

the melodies, although simple, were cool and got across a mildly dramatic feel. the drum loop u used was good too. however...

the main synth that plays throughout the song just flat out hurts! its so loud compared to everthing else, and sounds very harsh, so it comes off to me as irritating. also, id like to see more variation in the drums rather than just loop them for the entire song.

so, although the song itself was okay, some elements made it less intersting and listenable than it could be. work hard at it, you can make an awesome song if u tried since this isnt that bad. [sorry if im being harsh or anything, jst givin constructive criticism.]
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