Wow nice
I have to say the "START" of this was beautifull the very first few seconds then you build it up from that but I do believe that first few seconds could be stretched out longer and more throughout the song, overall the whole piece was solid, This song was rather neat and gives me that feeling of something differant from all the rest, so as this starts off I was much enjoying this, so props to you for a decent start at this. Theres lots more to hear and see so I will continue on with your work, So before I head out here I would for sure like to check out anymore work of yours you have planned for the future, but untill then great stuff here. just keep doing what you do and bring great audio to the portal.
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I do believe that first few seconds could be stretched out longer and more throughout the song
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