Very good chorus here, but it begs to be developed further. Perhaps another bass line could be added near the end, and then add some string accompaniment? Just spitballing here. Good work.
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A dusty wasteland
Very good chorus here, but it begs to be developed further. Perhaps another bass line could be added near the end, and then add some string accompaniment? Just spitballing here. Good work.
I like that suggestion though with this piece and as lazy as it sounds, I prefer a more minimalist approach to produce a more broader ambient sound that lets the mind wander.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.