I like the atmosphere and beat at the beginning, and also the sense of climax into :12. The synth line at :12 seemed a little dissonant with the underlying chord progression, but I appreciate the filtering work at around :40. The piece is a tad slow to progress for the first minute, but there’s a good sense of build into 1:00. The piece still doesn’t have much in the way of strong melodic content, and the arpeggios at 1:25 don’t feel dynamic enough to count. The production quality is pretty strong. While very atmospheric, the mix is really tight and the drums and lead synths come through the texture very clearly. Towards the end, this piece begins to feel very harmonically repetitive, and I wanted to see you do more with some of the compositional aspects of the track - phrasing, variety, structural contrast, etc. Overall, strong work with the atmosphere, mixing, and sound design. I think elements of the composition, tonality, and uniqueness of the track might need some more work. Keep at it, Iorilicea! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
6.75/10
iorilicea 
