Welp I feel like you added too much distortion on that bass of yours playing throughout the whole song, which made it a bit uncomfortable to listen to. Also, I think you need to add something like a pad or another sound [your preference, whether it compliments the main melody or it's just for atmosphere], because your song feels a bit empty. As for the drums, I can say that the rides and the open hats are a bit too loud. And maybe instead of having a kick to lead you into the drop at 1:50, why not use something along the lines of toms? Then, maybe change up the melody a bit at 1:53, because it's the same as :49 [correct me if I'm wrong] as it would sound repetitive. Everything else is ok I guess.