boring

this is just boring, you really need to try to make some better melodies and be able to vary it more through the song

you like to pitch drums up and down a lot, but it almost never sounds good with the melody

if you took some of your style right now, and applied it to a more structured form of writing music, i think you would be writing a lot better.
you may get points for being original sometimes, but just bc ur the first to do something doesnt mean that it is good

stick with it, and try to be more melodic, or even just structured if you like rhythm more.

the audio-bot is fucked

First off, that drone note was just annoying, your beat made sense...to some extent, to the point whenn all the drums were doing there own little solo. the song is missing any sort of tension are climax or any sort of musical theory. But i ahev to say, it is good to the extent that i can hear some of the work you put into it. for about maybe an hour, then you just repeated patterns and threw them together in a shuffle. CONGRATS ON THE SECOND PLACE THOUGH!!!!

Not bad...

The intro beat is kinda catchy ! The thing I like in that song is the variety in the drums, I think it's really good. The file size is pretty small compared to your other songs. Anyway, not my favorite song of yours, but still pleasant to hear.

Nice work.

Okay

Wasn't your best piece, but was okay. Lacked diversity, would have made a better loop. Good to see you're still working on your audio though.

Might wanna vote on this urself dude, it would seem you haven't done that yet. Well, see ya around NG