nice...but could use more mixing.
for example the bass that starts at 0:17 has a lot of of high and middle frequencies,that is the reason why the leads can not shine!.
also that is one of the reasons everything is fighting at 0:33 to 1:06.
the short part at 1:07 to 1:14 sounds great :v but needs more mixing.
after that comes the drop,in all honesty it took me a while to realize that the drop even started
(and that is a problem),putting the buildup at a low volume can help your drop sound louder and perhaps more energetic (adding a silence between the buildups and the drops also works).
THE DROP WAS AMAZING....uhm sry caps,the growls were brilliant...but they were so quite(distortion needed!!)
the leads and the melody were amazing too(idk if you should add side chain or if you already did...the drums were kinda weak but if it is your style keep it how you like)
the rest was nice but...mixing issues :v nothing else to mention.

Good job,keep doing your best!! looking forward to hear more from you <3

neat