Respect

Very, Very, Very, Very, Very, Very, Very, Very, Very, Very good!

I love it

Can I tell a lie? I guess not. So I'll say what I think about it. This is the most successful attempt to create a short melody. This is the most successful attempt to create from, if I'm not mistaken, 3 a kind of music sounds, because unlike most...

But, I can't give you 5 points without merit. Did you listen to other tunes? It is known that in creativity there are no limits, your skills can be honed endlessly. 5 stars can Claim the one who processed and carefully planned his composition from beginning to end. A good melody has its own "feelings", which are transmitted to the listeners accordingly.
An example is:

[TMM43] Sundance;

We are one by johny2x4 Remix ;

Guitar Against. Piano [Ver. XCEED] (Goukisan Remix);

Xtrullor-Nirmiti.

I did not comment on these works because I have nothing to say. They are truly incomparable! You can only rate comparing with the other copies, and here only, alas, but if you compare this to your music...

I beg you. Music is your work, reviews depend on its quantity.
So, if you think that it is worthy of a five-digit mark, you are deeply mistaken. My support is not praise for emptiness, but opinions and recommendations. Compare yourself with others and develop competitiveness to be noticed. You need to be respectful to any activity. Learn to prove how and why your music is unique.

With respect to you, Aileron.