Nice, much wider than the other tracks, your volumes should build a bit more in the early parts, it fades in as if to get louder but then hovers at low intensity.

Melodies and composition again are very unique dude.

100% your focus is to get the mixing right and perhaps, well for this piece anyway, structure because it's not too clear where the lows and highs, the builds and falls are. For more popular music, and I know the vibe here is much more experimental, but if you want to head in that direction, just try to get the structure a bit more, dare I say, conventional. If you can find that happy medium.

Because your compositions are wicked dude, it just needs to glue a bit more and you have some fire on your hands!

Hope these reviews helped :)