dj nate use this track in him song of 2007

one word and some advice

This could actually be pretty sweet with a catchy lead and some filtering.

its not DNB of course, this is hardcore dance (not bad) but one word:
compressor.

put a compressor on master and add some melodies.

or scrap it, your choice lol

meh

Making DnB without making everyone complain about it not being 100% DnB is an nearly impossible challenge, but you failed a bit more than most- Cause you turned it 100% techno lol

I can't say I like it at all, there's way too much disortion and clippage, your synth choice is interesting tho- but that's it. It's repetitive and boring.

You can easily turn it into something trippy by adding basic stuff like leads and other synthasizz

Simple...

It's a good start, though as for whatever genre other people decided it was, I think it fits for what it is meant to be, so I'll give you that. I'm not used to hearing songs without much of a melody, so I'd really like a higher techno synth lead part in there somewhere.

It's good, but needs... more.

Cheers.

Not really DnB...

This isn't really DnB at all, as many have pointed out already, so I won't go into that. The synths were good, but some were too loud and kind of hurt my ears. The "whomp" synth especially got annoying with its high volume at parts. Different parts of the drums stop now and then, which I find very annoying. It's all right, though, you should just think about more volume control.