Nice dreamy synths at the beginning. The progression is a tad bizarre, though. The harmonies are a bit overwhelming, with a lot of dissonances between the pads and the pizzicato-y synths that come in at 1:10. That pizzicato-y synth sounds really cool, although the pattern of the riff got a little hard-to-follow by around the 2-minute mark. I liked it when you took a step back on the thickness of the texture at 2:02, but then the two prominent riffs at 2:20 step over each other a bit too much again. One thing I really liked about this piece was the drum samples. Good use of hi-hats, and creative rhythms for the snare. A lot of the riffs in here are really atonal, though. Maybe that's what you were going for, but it's a bit overwhelming when the piece is like that for most of these 5 minutes. Overall, there's definitely some strong work in here. I like the overall arc of the piece in terms of energy and directionality, but I think the piece lacks a coherent set of harmonies to keep the listener grounded. The mixing, sound design, and atmosphere of the piece are good, though. Keep at it, man! ^_^