A good start!
your intro guitar sounds a bit muddy and middy, however i like the main guitar, sounds as if it was recorded quite well actually.
The drums, i dunno if it was a bad recording on them but they sound a bit like ur typical FL samples (good ones, but all fl samples are bad hehe)
I like the beat variation and stuff... but the drums do need to be louder.. if your recording drums live.. try using about 5 mics some people will even tell ya more..
Also... where is the bass in this track? And yeah.. i also feel that lyrics would be a handy accesory to this tune.
Keep up the good work, you show alot of promise!