This track is a pretty decent remake to your other one from 2018. It fixes a lot of the problems I personally found in it (mainly pretty bad mixing and awful drop).
The entire beginning is great. It builds tension really well and the sound design is very good (for the most part). Though after that part it kinda goes downhill:
Right off the bat, I hate the piano sample. It sounds very stock like, and it has no eq or reverb to make it sound somewhat better. The drums are fine, but i really dislike the supposed-to-be snare. maybe its just me liking hard hitting snares more, but i find the sound very disappointing.
Now for the arrangement: this track has no end. There is no actual drop to relieve the tension, so its just building tension until it very suddenly ends. For a casual listener this can be pretty disappointing, because the track goes nowhere. I also found myself skipping through the part at 1:19 because its just the same thing at 0:40. Nothing was changed in it at all, therefore the track doesn't end properly.
In conclusion: consider making a drop next time, and not copy-pasting a part.