it was good..

the synth is the only thing thats holding back this piece(the short synth sounds in the background) but when the beat comes in it makes all the difference but all in all it was very good i enjoyed it

Diversity

I thought the intro lasted a little too long. I think you should have put your own hardcore spices in there, if you wanted to make it that fucking long.
I don't like your insturment choice. I think there is one called 'Rave Lead' or something like that. I'll tell you what, I don't like it. It doesn't sound good in the song one bit, and that Piano is pissing me off. It's way too repetitive. I'm glad I don't play FF because I'm sure that song would piss me off.
You just need to spice up the songs you make man. It's not bad, trust me, I've reviewed worse, but it could be a lot better.
Everlasting-Elements
3/5 Average.
Come review me sometime. I'm going to make a VG remix. Maybe it could help you...