I like the smooth, cinematic strings and flutes and the beats here. The compression is a bit heavy, but I’m more worried about the lack of lower frequencies in the texture. The melodic breakdown at :51 is nice, but otherwise the piece doesn’t really feel structurally complete. It’s also a bit disjointed with the arrangement, as the composition seems to be of an ABC form without much structural repetition. Overall, I think you need to flesh out the composition a lot more and balance the frequencies a bit better, but I did enjoy the sound design, mood, and atmosphere of the piece. Keep at it, Ruko29! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7/10