Nice! The melodies are really cool and it feels like they make a turn out of nowhere, adding that badass flavour. I know that I can explain poorly just anything, but I'm trying my best.
Now snare on the other hand sounded like at times it didn't punch through as much, everything was louder than it.
P.S. I agree with you, constructive criticism is a must-have for a musician,it's helping you move forward and work on your flaws.
P.S.2. Sorry for the essay, can't help it