Oooof, okay, where to start.

The melody at the beginning - Both melodies, separately, are awesome. 0:58 to 1:10 was one of the dopest things I've heard today. The biggest bit of criticism though is that the two melodies together don't fit and sound very disjointed together, especially at the beginning. I'm not sure, maybe moving the synth melody up a step or two would resolve it a lot better.

I'm not sure if a wall of sound if what you were going for but you've certainly achieved it. Once the beat hit, it was very difficult to ascertain anything going as opposed to the rhythmic thudding of the bass, which, to your credit, is a punchy bass.

There's tonnes of potential here man, maybe turn your levels down and give everything a bit of a chance to be heard!