Meh.

It's not that you have a bad voice, and the guitar is well done, you just need to get some better equipment. The vocals get louder as you go, which is great, but still, the volume difference between the guitar and the vocals isn't a good thing.

Good

You're great. don't stop.

sweet! second review!

This is nice, and other than a few spots where the lyrics were just a bit off tune, sounds good. most people ruin the music by speeding it up a bit too much and rushing the lyrics. good job with taking it slow. still, try to fix up on the errors, and it'll be a great hit. still good as it is though.
-the normally irate critic

not bad at all

u should try and put out a cd if u arleady havent the kind of music u put on ng is not rele me type but i still listen to it