I'm comparing this to version 2, the one I previously reviewed. The changes you made are subtle, but it is an improvement. The overall sound feels larger and more aggressive. The volume levels are definitely louder in this version. The instrumentation still seems a bit up-close, but if you are going for the sound of urgent conflict, you've certainly done it.

Now, I don't know how you mixed this, but I think in your future works you may want to consider using some mastering plugins for making the song louder. From my experience, it takes a lot of practice. I'd start by comparing your song's levels to one of a similar style that you like (to use as a reference) and playing around with levels and plugins to get your song to sound the way you want it.

I hope this helps. :)