No. Original more better

well well

prety nice
but there needs to add something that make it more interesting
sometimes its a bit boring becouse there arnt much sounds in it

That's cool...

But something seems to be missing here. I think you should put harder beats, man!

ya! cool

great job!

Well....

I never heard the original, as I am not a regular to the audio portal. But this song was pretty cool, I liked the hi-hat sound you had in there along with some of synthesizer! Nice kick too!