Um... Apple Loops anyone?

This track doesn't sound good and there is a reason for that.
This is just you layering loops from garageband on top of eachother....
What the fuck dude?!
This is by far one of the most lazy 'click and drag' jobs I have ever seen!
Try making your own melodies and beats for once.
Don't bother uploading the rest of it's all like this...

awesome beat

Great Job

You got me thinkin'

This is was amazing, keep working with stuff like this !
Gratz for beeing the musician of tha week!

Cool.

Very cool. Scouting for music for my upcoming (Hopefully) Game. This might be a goer!

The beginning leaves a little to be desired, and perhaps the style is a tad inconsistent throughout, but it's pretty dang good.

Thumbs up, dude!

OK criticisms.

Not bad at all for a '5th' song. Loving some of the guitar sounds you used. Really intreging (spelling?) melody. Catchy and energetic.

As for the drum sections, a little weak. Don't be afraid to bring them further forward in the mix. Also when the heavier drum pattern kicks in try adding a low sub bass with every bass drum kick. Tends to thicken the drum sounds out and adds that little extra depth.

All in all this piece has huge potential, it's kinda gritty with pleanty going on but when it reaches climax it really needs to be pushed.

I'm very impressed for a 5th song, keep composing man and I hope you find this comment fair and perhaps constructive.

James