In order for me to give a helpful review with constructive feedback that meets my review standards, I think you should add in your description your thought process behind making this song as well as what thoughts went into its title, "Broken Dreams". If you clearly state theses pieces of information, I won't have to resort to simply judging by my opinion, and it could affect my rating as well.
As it is, My opinion is simply that I think it's okay. It doesn't wow me.
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806