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This is a nice summery song I made this week, I just wanted to start making some happy chords and some positive music, because I think its due time everyone cheered the frick up yaknow.
If you like souncloud its here too:
CaptainBoomcake responds:
aw thats a shame :3 oh well onwards and upwards!
UPDATE:
Thank you for clarifying why you chose the title. I figured that's the kind of thing you are going for, but it clears things up to hear it from you.
Original 4 Star Review:
"I think this song does a decent job at making me feel like I want to forget my worries through partying. It also does a good job with the imagery. I can see the outdoor club on the beach at night in the summer as people are having a well-deserved good time.
One suggestion I have for you to play around with would be to consider using major chords in your piece. There's a lot of power chords being used, which is good for adding thickness to a piece. The thing is, power chords are by their nature ambiguous in how they display mood. From my experience, major chords tend to represent positive emotions and minor chords tend to represent negative emotions. That's not always the case, of course, but for me personally it often is.
With regard to the title, It's slightly unclear why you named it 2021. My guess would be to show optimism, but I think it would be helpful to hear from you why you named it that.
I hope you find this information useful. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806"
CaptainBoomcake responds:
its called 2021 cause I didn't wanna associate it with this year! I wanted it to feel like a new leaf for peoples ears, and for them to look forward to the world that we have to look forward to, once we can see our friends again and go to places again and live. Its certainly been hard to experience live music lately.
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