I think it would be in your best interest if you provided in your description what you were trying to do here. It would help me be better able to give more helpful feedback, a more accurate rating, and allow me to base my review more on how well I thought your intent came through.
For example, why title your piece "Starlight Paradox I ~SS~"? Knowing that would help me get a better understanding of where you are coming from.
I will say, although it's short, I like the piece overall. I think your thumbnail artwork does match the title. Not sure about how it fits the piece, though.
Technically, there are parts in the second half where the volume is distorted in a way that sounds unpleasant, and the ending is awkward because of the way it stops so suddenly. I wonder, was that intended?
I hope you find this review helpful in some way. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806
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