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keep making sick lyrics and beats love you

i am really digging this dude! good to see you still making music!

I'm not feeling it, lyrical delivery is lackluster and the patterns are chaotic about the topic, this entire song left me craving lyrical consistency and flawless movement.

I wana rap battle some one

Case and point, LITERALLY the only audible half a bar in this. I'm gonna tell you something a rapper who was better than me, told me, 5 or 6 years ago; "CHILL OUT, your lyrics are good, but not that good. Go back, rewrite it so it's easy enough that your tongue doesn't trip on every syllable." I'm actually disappointed. You had the opportunity to really speak a message, but you tried forcing way too much. I respect the feedback you provide me for my art in general (whack AF). But this, as a response, I'm kinda hurt. In my mind, there were 2 options, 1) you would duck out and keyboard smash and say I'm whack. 2) You'd respond with an absolute truth ringer that would bring some amount of heat.... instead... I get this fucking verbal spaghetti. I'll download it though, I'm gonna give it a listen, maybe I'll do some better mixing on it so its audible, and then, I'll decide if this is even worth responding to.

I'm giving this 5 stars because at least you did respond, and dispite a disagreement, I respect you for sticking to your truth.

But, I calls it like I sees it, and right now, you're "soft", in my humble opinion.