Might as well review what you think is your best
electronic song that is...
I think you have way too much distortion....no you do have too much. It's either that or your cutoff dial is screaming to the max. The intro was just too messy. I did notice the panning of the percussion so that I commend you on. Okay so you got the kick the nice bass, but fix those higher frequency instruments.
At 2:23 let the randomness come in. Prior to that point the flow of the song was decent, but this part just sounds like you mashed the key as fast as you can randomly. I never did like gabber.
Meh, everything just seems not well composed. I understand the numerous melodies going which increases the difficulty in making the song, but you have to make the melodies match well together. This looks like an old song of yours so you probably fixed up on your mistakes. Your ambient stuff sounds more ordered. I'll have to hear your recent electronic stuff to see what you still need to improve on. No hard feelings on the score I hope. See yah.