If you and Waterflame do a collab together I swear I will flip out and donate £3000

yea kinda agree with creka, it does get a little chaotic at the end, and also the fact that i do this bs too in my songs. i would say you sort of nailed his style? i mean i wouldn't be surprised if someone told me waterflame made this. standalone wise, this is still very polished.

Its a bit chaotic maybe more than one melody playing at once? I did the same mistake in my songs so try tighting it up and the overall dynamics could be a bit better but well done so far i like that speedy waterflame vibe :D