That ending caught me so off guard
"I guess you'll have to leave me"
"Finally"
Gunshy gone solo acoustic with guess-how-many-chords?!
WARNING: Explicit Lyrics - Duh
"Four Fucking Chords"
by Me
it's never something new
but this is quickly getting old
no room for spontaneity
i'm just doing what i'm told
while i'm force-fed fuzzy logic
and i'm forced to feel confused
the only thing that's clear is we've been mentally abused
it's just the same old fucking thing...
you'll just have to believe me
for the broken dreams of lovers
and the frozen hearts of gods
this becomes a field maneuver
called "deflect and camouflage"
in my mind my mind makes sense
but in my heart i know i'm wrong
but from the way the gods are acting i just don't know whose side i'm on
it's just the same old fucking thing...
a raft on the open sea
the girl over whom i pine told me to my face
'it's not enough to love and worship someone for just as long as they should want'
i imagine if things were different
or if i'd gone the extra mile
but it's hard to walk with two broken legs
and still maintain a smile
it's just the same old fucking thing...
i guess you'll have to leave me
[+G]
That ending caught me so off guard
"I guess you'll have to leave me"
"Finally"
Nice work here
Love the "GUITAR" sound you got going on in here, the voice or vocals are actually notbad, seems like you could really fine tune it into some top quality stuff, a good piece here if you ask me, keep up the great work I look forward to even more.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe have the Vocals stand out more with more louder them on the vocals.
~X~
UGH if only the download button was properly working... ;_;
I`m new to NG, registered like a week ago, but man this is THE best song i have heard so far.
Lyrics are good and with meaning( i think songs are more interesting with meaningfull lyrics).
And i liked guitar too, doesn`t matter how many chords are in song.
WELCOME!
This is one of my favorite songs of yours! Your lyrics are quite deep as well, you're an inspiration of mine when it comes to songwriting. And your voice in this, is just...I'm at a loss for words. Amazing is an understatement, sir. Keep it up!
Thank you so much! :)))
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.